1st version refection

After editing and watching the 1st version this is my reflection on what I thought we managed to do well and what wasn't as effective as we hoped.

I feel that our product currently tries to tell a long story in a short amount of time which is not possible effectively. There are too many locations and details revealed and due to this it has to end abruptly as we are over the time limit. For example, the last clip which reveals the death of Red is unnecessary as it communicates what will happen in the whole movie if it was to be created.

There are sections of the sound that need volume adjustments as they are going over the dialogue and making it difficult to follow the storyline.

The pace of editing is good as it starts slow and as the opening continues and suspense builds the editing speeds up.

There is currently no additional colour on the first draft so adding it can only make the production more vivid and catch more attention.