Feedback to 1st draft

 

 1) What sort of audience do you think it would attract?

The first question feedback highlighted that we managed to target our audience of adolescences and up to the age of 25.

Is it identifiable as a thriller? What subgenre?

This shows that we achieved what was stated in the brief to make a thriller opening.

What age rating do you think it should be?

We were targeting a 15 rating and the answer to the question shows this.

Do you think the music works well with the chosen genre?

The feedback showed us that our music choice was good so we decided to stay with that for our final version.

Does the pace of the film complement the genre?

Feedback suggests the pace was slow at the start which is what we were aiming for to give an eerie feeling and then it picked up towards the end to create suspense.

Does it feel like a film opening?

The answer is suggest it does however when we watched it for a second and third time we decided that the end was showing too much and it was almost a full movie not just the opening which is what we stated in the brief.